Avid reader, part time gamer. I read and review books for other readers, not for authors. I review mostly M/M books, so if that doesn't float your boat, well, there are other boats in the sea, other reviewers in this great blogosphere!
This felt like two separate stories- the story of the fire spirit and what he does, and the story of a pretty college student and a bad case of misunderstanding. Both in themselves were pretty good stories (or beginnings of good ones), but I would have liked the to come together more.