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Bitchie's Books
Avid reader, part time gamer. I read and review books for other readers, not for authors. I review mostly M/M books, so if that doesn't float your boat, well, there are other boats in the sea, other reviewers in this great blogosphere!
Just Friends
Not even worth the borrow on KU.First off, the blurb isn't a blurb, it's an excerpt, first scene out of the book, and actually tells you nothing about the plot. Second, this is a gay for you first time experience, crammed into only 12 pages. Third, the writing is awkward, disjointed, and unedited. Passed/past errors, absolutely no scene breaks or indication of POV shifts or even location changes, etc. Fourth, it totally skipped over the freaking sex scene!
"My girlfriend cheated on me, hand on knee, OMG I want to totally block her out of my mind, hand on other guy's pants," and then it's the next freaking day! Seriously?