Avid reader, part time gamer. I read and review books for other readers, not for authors. I review mostly M/M books, so if that doesn't float your boat, well, there are other boats in the sea, other reviewers in this great blogosphere!
I have to DNF this one. Hell, I didn't really even get started. Just a few pages in, the writing is HORRIBLE (commas are your friends, authors!), and even though I keep trying to get my interest back into it, I just can't.
So I'm not going to rate it, since I only read the first few pages, but if you decide to try it out, proceed with caution. Don't believe all the glowing 5 star reviews, because the sentence structure is just so bad. Even if the story itself is awesome, no way is this worth 5 freaking stars.
Underneath the spoiler tag is the first, oh so painful paragraph. Maybe I'm being too picky? Naaah!
Edited Nov 1st to add screenshots taken directly from my copy of the ebook, opened in Calibre. It displays the same way on my reader, I did NOT delete any commas or edit the passage I posted in any way, and I resent being accused of doing so.