This wasn't bad, but it wasn't great either. It felt like the author was having the guys talk like she thought a couple of rough and tumble rodeo guys would talk, but then every once in a while, she would slip up, and they would sound way too "proper", IMO. Then there was the typing the guy hands over his head, who'd recently dislocated his shoulder, and needed surgery to fix it properly.
I also didn't like how Curt would lecture Levi on being out and proud with who he was in one breath, and then in the next be thinking about how he and Levi would have to be very discreet because guys on the circuit wouldn't like it. Hypocrite, much?